For my last message, I need to evaluate Anaïs’ food blog in general
Anaïs
At first sight, your food blog looks amazing. Still, this is only your front page, I did not yet read your messages. We will start with your ‘About me’.
In your ‘About me’, you did everything that was told. You wrote a text of several sentences. I liked the things you told us about yourself. Now we know who you are, where you come from, what your do in your spare time… Everything looks very clear and you didn’t make any mistakes.
Next, we have the ‘Did you know’. The thing I really like is the image above. The ‘WOW’ catches the eye whereby the readers will be attracted. The second thing that I also like is that I didn’t know any of your facts. I found one mistake; in the text about ice-cream, you wrote ‘1. Where’. I think you forgot that is was already written in the beginning. For the rest, you used clear images and you added the sources.
Then, we arrived at the ‘My one and only’. I really love the introduction. In this small text, you tell us why you like it and what you can add to it. I also like the paragraph beneath. You bring the recipe in an original way. For example, you speak directly to the reader. Again, your English is good, you used an image and added sources.
To end, we are at the ‘Heaven on earth’. You tell us in this paragraph what your favorite restaurant is. While I read it, I could see you love it there because of what you wrote. I love the way you classified the text. You told us about the food, the beverages, the atmosphere and the employees. You really convinced me to go there by confirming that they have the best pasta in the world. Next time I am in Hasselt, I will go there.
Because I think this was a lot of information, I will give you a summarize. You gave us a good header, you did all the assignments, your English was perfect (although, I did find some mistakes), your stile was clear and adapted to the target audience (not to easy, not to difficult), you used images, you gave us your sources…
Great job!!!!!
regards, Maarten


